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Sophy's mistake 5

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Sophy's mistake 5

A portal started opening in the back yard of a house, edging the forest. A few minutes ago, everything had been silent and the wind of the night was the only thing moving there. A slash was drawn in middle of the air and it started widening, turning into a complete circle. On it was shown like the surface of the water two figures coming out of it. The first one to come out of it, producing ripples; it came an elegantly dressed woman, with crimson hair and gorgeous hair.

"Eden, stop playing and cross" She yelled at the portal. And seconds later, Another woman came out of it, she was young, about to turn 18, she had the crimson hair of Gwen, the other woman, with a slight hint of brown of it, dressed in a simple red shirt and some jeans. Once she was outside, she looked at her mother with and with a hint of worry in her voice

"Mum, why is all this happening? Earlier this evening I was normal and now… Why did you call me Eden?"

The mother sighed and looked around, it was almost pitch black and they were out in the open. "We should head inside" She said (ordered) her daughter as she head inside through the back yard door, seemingly ignoring the question.

Edward let out a frustrated sigh as she followed, everything had happened so fast in the last hours and even though Isabella explained much of what has happened there were still many gaps to be filled. Anyway she entered the house, It wasn't big but it was quite luxurious, it was quite dark, but quickly solved when Gwen turned on the lights. Gwen looked at his son-now-daughter, who was rubbing her eyes from the sudden lights. "Sit down, I guess we'll be having some talking before resting."

Ed realized she was tired of all that's transpired. Glancing at the clock she saw it was 3 am. Still she obeyed her mom's words and sat down on the couch. Her mother took seat on a sofa in front of her.

"I guess I need to talk to you a little bit and explain the some of the bits Isabel omitted. First of all, I trust she already told you of your "unique" heritage. I'm really sorry to have hidden this from you all this time, your father and I felt our kind had to get in touch with the humans and know how their world is and works, leaving among them to make you a better …person. We knew you were bound to found out at the age of 18 when the spell dispelled, at that time I would have something prepared for that and help you cope with your new form"

She was a bit angered but understood her parent's reasons, guessing that if he (back when he was a boy) would have found out the secret he would have believed himself above the rest, was that why Sophy acted that way? Still, it was quite of a shock and it dawned to her that at 18 her life would end.

"But, what was gonna happen to me when I turned 18? Would've still be able to be human?" She asked again

"That day you and I would've left to Avalon, a sanctuary for our kind… because we are a hunted specie" Edward was about to object but controlled herself and allowed her to finish "Regarding your second question. No, though you can learn to shapeshift like I do"

"But, I can shapeshift, see…" Edward said raising her hand which changed before their eyes: Fingers joining togethes, nails growing to cover the digits and turning black and white fur growing. Until the end result was a three fingered hoof-like hand at the end of her arm.

"Isabel commented that she gave you the same explanation about your current predicament. She gave me. You are technically what a daughter between you and Sophy would look like. The spell was good and as it turns out, you are now a halfbreed, You now have the innate ability to shift between human and unicorn. If this hadn't happened you would've needed to learn how to change on your own. Of course now, no matter how much you train, as long as those magical locks remain in you, you will remain as a female hybrid." She said

Edward was still letting all sink either way his life was over, not only now he was unrecognizable, he would irremediably change into a horse with a stick on his forehead. He now was bound to be a girl and why?, because a stupid mistake from a witch, and not only that, he was to stay that way, unable to even shapeshift into anything else. All this was allowing anger to start to start resurfacing. Gwen noticed this and holded her hand.

"Listen, Eden," Again she was using that name "I didn't want this to happen, and I know things will be tougher for you from now on."

"Maybe Marina and her mother can solve this out" Said Edward hoping all was solved.

"I don't want to lift your hopes but the only way they can manage to solve this is if they find who set the locks. The other way is dispelling them using powerful counter-spells which will take time, which is something we don't have, Eden"

Fearfully she asked "Why we don't have time? Are you taking me to Avalon? Because I can still pass as a human. And why do you keep calling me Eden?"

Taking a deep sigh. "The plan to leave to Avalon is happening halfbreed or not." Ed tried to protest but her mother just used a more decisive tone "We are not staying, already wrapping things up: Pulling some strings so you vanish from the college data banks and you already have somebody willing to rent the house. You will be coming with me, boy or girl, and those are my final words. And I'm sorry but I certainly don't see an easy way out of this mess, so from now on your name will be Eden in case of the worst scenario."

For Edward this was it, she wasn't only loosing her friends and home, but her mum was already projecting their situation as a hopeless one. She was to stay female and worst of all he would be alone, she would leave her friends and Gwen no longer seemed as a loving person. She was starting to feel anger and tears building up in her eyes, as loneliness started to invade her, there was simply nowhere for the emotions to hide.

Her body was starting to change involuntarily, white fur started growing and spreading all around her body. She noticed the involuntary change and tried to stop it but couldn't, she watched hopelessly as her other hand changed to match the other. Her muzzle started pushing out slowly why her horn was returning. A familiar yet unfamiliar twitching on her ass told Ed that her tail had returned. But to her surprise Gwen approached and hugged her changing daughter.

"Breathe calmly, it's ok" She said as she hugged Edward, making him break into crying. The transformation stopped. The mother understood what her daughter was going through, the emotions, anger and sadness this sort of moments could bring.

After having her tear ducts dried, Edward managed to change back into her female body. She looked up at her mother who was looking back with a maternal smile; the change of personality was surprising and it wasn't hard to make it motive of interrogation.

"Mum, why did you change, you weren't like this" Said Edward as Gwen sat down.

Gwen looked at her. "I'm sorry if I acted dominant, it is just that, when I saw you after the change some fears arose. You see, I've had friends with daughters and all that time they mostly told me of how anger-driven they could be, I was getting afraid of the problems they caused and it reached its peak when in an outburst of rage one of them killed her parents. When I saw you back then I feared the worst was gonna happen and I though I wouldn't be able to handle you." She said quite sorry "Obviously I overdid. Seeing you just now reminded me you are still my son. I am sorry I overlooked that, right now you need a friend. All the emotions that come with a female body, specially the biological predisposition all fillies have, are hard to control, trust me I know. Now we just have to find a way you can channel them…"

Right now Edward was tired and quite sleepy, it had been a long tiring day and the time she spent as a baby sleeping was short. Her mother noticed "…But we can sort that out tomorrow. Now, go and get some sleep" She said as she stood up and headed into her room, not before hugging her daughter as a way to show her some support. She was still in control, and Edward would still have to obey her, but she was more lenient.

Edward arrived into her room. It was just as she remembered leaving it before leaving to college for her evening classes. She headed to the bathroom to brush her teeth and inevitably caught a sight of herself in the mirror, just like she did back in Sophy's house. The brown reddish hair cascading past her shoulders, the green nice eyes, the nice perky nose and cute lips. A face she would have like to date as a guy. She started approaching the young woman in the mirror, mesmerized by her looks and a bit due to the need to sleep, was about to kiss her when she realized what she was doing.

Backing out a bit ashamed, she shook her head. Her unsupported breasts bouncing and rubbing against the shirt's fabric causing alien pleasurable feelings. Taking a deep sigh, she brushed her teeth. This has been a really stress full day.

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"Mom, can you restore my ears back to normal?" Asked Sophy as her mom, Isabel was heading off to sleep. She stood there wearing her nightgown and sporting a pair of long ears standing almost on top of her head. She knew she partly deserved them, and really hoped her mother was lenient to her. Transformation curses weren't her strong point so she couldn't change them on her own.

"Sophy, we have to do some research on the whereabouts of uncle Morty and track ingredients as a plan B. I'm really tired"

"Yeah, but I won't be able to leave the house without getting some odd looks from people, I had plans for tomorrow." Sophy tried to make an excuse for her to make the change

Isabel was getting frustrated at her immaturity. "Ok, I'll make you normal" she said making a gesture with both hands while muttering some words.

Sophy waited for the spell to take effects. But instead of the expected tingling on her ears it was all over her body. Her gown, which fitted perfectly a few minutes ago was starting to get bigger to her. He looked at her hands in fear, her digits were getting stubbier and smaller.

"Mom whath are you dhoing?" She said alarmed, feeling her new buckteeth affect her language. Trying to take a step forward she found out her feet were so big they were pouring out of the sandals making her almost stumble.

"Consider this your punishment for the remainder of the night," She said yawning and closing the bedroom door behind her.

Sophy tried to head to her room, remembering the counterspell, She carefully paying attention to her new big feet, which were getting longer by the second and tried not trip over her nightgown. She tried muttering the words but they all came with a slip of tongue, making the "ts" into "ths". Eventually her small muzzle formed and her vocal chords changed accordingly making it impossible to cast the counter spell. She kept shrinking and brown fur covered her body. She looked at her hand, now a complete rabbit paw and felt her backside as she felt something grow on it, a rabbit's tail. By this time, her gown fitted her like a tent, she tried to get out of it when her bones started shifting locking her in a quadruped stance as well as making her arms and legs unable to rotate.

All that was left was a rabbit, struggling to get out of a night gown. Once it was out she tried to learn the basic movements and hopped towards her room, which to her dismay, was closed by the wind. She mentally cursed herself for asking her mom. Still she returned to her gown and slept on top of it. Thinking, before dozing off, which of the guys from the magic corner in the forest would fit Edward, maybe Vince, the centaur or John, the werewolf…zzz

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Gwen took some time to change the sleeping clothes of her son and turn them into their female counterparts. Fortunately they were a plain T-shirt and shorts so the only changes were the proportions. Still it was quite a drag for Edward to change clothes.

"Ok, that's all for now, tomorrow I'll start working on the rest and I'll teach you how to act and basic magic."

"Good night mum" Ed said, still a bit blown away from what had happened.

"G'night" She said as she headed out.

Edwards plopped over her bed. Inevitably thinking on everything, from the change to how she changed. The scaring revelations, how her life would've still changed and even began considering how her life would be... Eventually she began thinking on how she could change, maybe she could study to dispel the lock… Perhaps…zzz
Here is the part 5 of Sophy's mistake. I'd admit it is not one of my best efforts. But i'm doing this in between study sessions, so it is quite rushed.

As always comments are welcome, hope it's good

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Therandomguy5's avatar
Yep... Not seeing any evidence Sophy is a decent person.